The environment
Nowadays, most people aren’t aware of the importance of taking care of the environment, but it’s really true that we’re suffering the negative consequences and they will continue to happen in the future.
On one hand, I believe that every one of us should inquire about this matter, I mean, how we could do our bit to help. It might be easier than we think because all what we have to do is so simple, in a nutshell, recycling paper, cardboard, glass and all kinds of containers, wrappings, etc.
On the other hand, governments should keep a close eye on the industries that are polluting and ruining the planet’s resources by dumping waste in rivers and seas.
Apart from this, there are other environmental factors causing chronic diseases, cancer and even death, such as, air pollution and climate change caused by other factors such as excessive energy consumption, emissions of carbon dioxide, gasses uses for industrial processes, etc.
However, we can’t remain idle but proposing solutions to sort out the problem and here are some of my proposals: Using public transports and bicycle as much as possible, not throwing away rubbish in river and seas, and the last one classifying rubbish in different containers.
To sum up, we all need to take urgent measures as many people get ill and other pass away every year all around the world due to different pollution related problems.
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The environment
Nowadays, most people aren’t aware of the importance of taking care of the environment, but it’s really true that we’re suffering the negative consequences of ... + and they will continue to happen persist in (the) future.On one hand, I believe that every one of us should inquire about this matter, I mean that is, how we could do our bit to help. It might be easier than we think because all what that we have to do is so simple: in a nutshell, recycling paper, cardboard, glass and all kinds of containers, wrappings, etc.
On the other hand, governments should keep a close eye on the industries that are polluting and ruining the planet’s resources by dumping waste in rivers and seas.
Apart from this, there are other environmental factors causing chronic diseases, cancer, and even death, such as, air pollution and climate change caused by other factors such as excessive energy consumption, emissions of carbon dioxide, and gasses uses for industrial processes, etc.
However, we can’t (shouldn't) remain idle but proposing should propose solutions to sort out (resolve) the problem. and Here are some of my proposals: using public transports and bicycles as much as possible, not throwing away rubbish in rivers and seas, and the last one, classifying separating rubbish into different containers.
To sum up, we all need to take urgent measures as many people get fall/become ill and others pass away every year all around the world due to different pollution-related problems.
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My comment: Detailed and generally well-written essay.
+ The negative consequences of...? You must specify what has provoked these negatives consequences.
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