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Sleep
1-I think that I haven't enough and organized sleep,because I usually stay up until the late hours after the midnight,then I get to be at dawn.
2-Because some people have a clear plan about their life, time for sleep, time for work and time for other things.They can manage their time.But some people who live in mess ,or they have a lot of problems in their life ,it's hard for them to get through this,and they might get an insomnia in the future.
3-Sometimes I try to do something useful ,like ,reading a book or any something else.But I prefer to fight until I could have sleep.
4-These days precisely, I sleep at dawn, and I wake up in the afternoon.
5- Yes,that was a year ago,I was in a trip with my colleagues at the Mediterranean beach,I slept on the sand,that was amazing and I had very good sleep.
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Sleep
1-I think that I do not get enough and organized sleep,because I usually awake until the late hours after the midnight,then I cannot get up at dawn.
2Though some people have a clear plan about their life as time for sleep,work and other things.They manage their time well,but there are some who live in mess ,they have lot of problems in their life ,it's hard for them to get through this,and they might get insomnia in the future.
3-Sometimes I try to do something useful ,like reading books or anything else,but I fight until i sleep.
4-These days usually , I sleep at dawn, and I wake up in the afternoon.
5- Indeed ,that was a year ago when i was in a trip with my colleagues at the Mediterranean beach,I slept on the sand,that was amazing and I had very good sleep.
1-I think that I do not get enough and organized sleep,because I usually awake until the late hours after the midnight,then I cannot get up at dawn.
2Though some people have a clear plan about their life as time for sleep,work and other things.They manage their time well,but there are some who live in mess ,they have lot of problems in their life ,it's hard for them to get through this,and they might get insomnia in the future.
3-Sometimes I try to do something useful ,like reading books or anything else,but I fight until i sleep.
4-These days usually , I sleep at dawn, and I wake up in the afternoon.
5- Indeed ,that was a year ago when i was in a trip with my colleagues at the Mediterranean beach,I slept on the sand,that was amazing and I had very good sleep.
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Sleep
1-I think that I do not get enough and organized sleep,because I usually awake until the late hours after the midnight,then I cannot get up at dawn.
2Though some people have a clear plan about their life as time for sleep,work and other things.They manage their time well,but there are some who live in mess ,they have lot of problems in their life ,it's hard for them to get through this,and they might get insomnia in the future.
3-Sometimes I try to do something useful ,like reading books or anything else,but I fight until i sleep.
4-These days usually , I sleep at dawn, and I wake up in the afternoon.
5- Indeed ,that was a year ago when i was in a trip with my colleagues at the Mediterranean beach,I slept on the sand,that was amazing and I had very good sleep.
1-I think that I do not get enough and organized sleep,because I usually awake until the late hours after the midnight,then I cannot get up at dawn.
2Though some people have a clear plan about their life as time for sleep,work and other things.They manage their time well,but there are some who live in mess ,they have lot of problems in their life ,it's hard for them to get through this,and they might get insomnia in the future.
3-Sometimes I try to do something useful ,like reading books or anything else,but I fight until i sleep.
4-These days usually , I sleep at dawn, and I wake up in the afternoon.
5- Indeed ,that was a year ago when i was in a trip with my colleagues at the Mediterranean beach,I slept on the sand,that was amazing and I had very good sleep.
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Sleep1-Sorry, I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, so I don't know how to correct it!
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3-Sometimes I try to do something useful ,like ,reading a book or any
4-These days precisely, I sleep at dawn, and I wake up in the afternoon.
5- Yes,that was a year ago,I was in a trip with my colleagues at the Mediterranean beach,I slept on the sand,that was amazing and I had very good sleep.
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