please correct my japAnese There was a Taiyaki fair at Meidi-ya supermarket today.My colleagues and I love the Taiyaki sold there.So i went down during lunch time and bought taiyaki for everyone.今日MEI

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please correct my japAnese There was a Taiyaki fair at Meidi-ya supermarket today.

My colleagues and I love the Taiyaki sold there.

So i went down during lunch time and bought taiyaki for everyone.

今日MEIDI-YAスーパーマーケットで鯛焼きのかんこうばがある。

同りょと私は鯛焼きが大好きです。

それから、昼ご飯時にいた鯛焼きを買いました。

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please correct my japAnese

There was a Taiyaki fair at Meidi-ya supermarket today.

My colleagues and I love the Taiyaki sold there.

So i went down during lunch time and bought taiyaki for everyone.

今日MEIDI-YAスーパーマーケット、明治屋で鯛焼きのかんこうばがあるフェアがありました。

同りょ僚（どうりょう）と私はそこの鯛焼きが大好きです。

それからですので、昼ご飯時お昼休みにいた皆のために鯛焼きを買いに行きました。

Please correct my Japanese.

There was a Taiyaki fair at Meidi-ya supermarket today.

今日、MEIDI-YA(めいじや)スーパーマーケットで鯛焼きフェアがあります。

(You can also say めいじや(明治屋) wothout "supermarket".)

My colleagues and I love the Taiyaki sold there.

同りょうと私はそこで売られている鯛焼きが大好きです。

So i went down during lunch time and bought taiyaki for everyone.

ですから、昼ご飯の時にみんなのために鯛焼きを買いに行きました。

Good job! I hope this helps you.

私もたい焼きが大好きです。同僚全員に、たい焼きを振る舞う(ご馳走する)Kelvinさんは、優しいですね。

Your Japanese is nice ! Keep going ;)

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