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Advertisement Given the mounting numbers of companies producing enormous kinds of products, advertisement has become an integral component in the competition between these companies. Unfortunately, some of these adverts are unethical and unacceptable. This essay tries to shed light on some of these unacceptable aspects. Nowadays, we are bombarded with adverts everywhere and every moment; on TV, Radio, streets, newspapers, and even on our cellphones. This extensive way of advertisement is extremely disturbing and violates our private life and peace of mind. Moreover some adverts are promoting harmful products such as tobacco and alcohol. When these ads are presented to youths and teenagers it lures them to try these products, which brings with it unwanted effects on their health. Furthermore, advertisement in most situations are misleading; exaggerating the benefits of the product and hiding its side effects. For instance, some cosmetics are claimed to have magical effects on our skin, while concealing the fact that some of its ingredients may be carcinogenic. At last but not least, the extensive advertisement of products that attract the attention of teenagers, such as garments and electronic devices, creates a financial pressure on most families. Families are usually compelled to buy things that they cannot afford or that will turn out to be unnecessary. In conclusion, it is obvious that some ways of advertisement are unethical and unacceptable, because it has deleterious impacts on individuals, families, and societies.

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Given the mounting numbers of companies producing a wide variety/range of products, advertisement has become an integral component in the competition between these companies. Unfortunately, some of these adverts are unethical and unacceptable. This essay tries to shed light on some of these unacceptable aspects.


Nowadays, we are bombarded with adverts everywhere and at every moment [or: at every turn]; on TV, radio, streets, newspapers, and even on our cellphones. This extensive [or: pervasive/ubiquitous] way of advertisement is extremely disturbing and violates our private life [or: privacy] and peace of mind. Moreover some adverts are promoting harmful products such as tobacco and alcohol. When these ads are presented to youths and teenagers it lures them to try these products, which brings with it unwanted effects on their health.


Furthermore, advertisements in most situations are misleading, exaggerating the benefits of the product and hiding its side effects. For instance, some advertisements claim cosmetics are claimed to have magical effects on our skin, while concealing the fact that some of the ingredients may be carcinogenic. Last but not least, the extensive advertisement of products that attract the attention of teenagers, such as garments and electronic devices, creates a financial pressure on most families. Families are usually compelled to buy things that they cannot afford or that will turn out to be unnecessary.


In conclusion, it is obvious that some methods of advertisement are unethical and unacceptable because they have a deleterious effect on individuals, families, and societies.

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