The Sport I Would Like To Practice
I would like to begin practising surfing but I don't live near to the sea, actually, it is to more than three hours by car so it is not a real possibility.
In recent years there have been many successful surfers in my country. They have won championships and tournaments around the world. The most known surfer is Sofia Mulanovich, who won one World Championship in the past decade.
The majority of surfers learnt to surf in the north of my country, in that place, there are high waves but I live in the south, where there aren't good waves to surf.
I only practice swimming, four or five times a week, in the mornings, sometimes the weather is cold but swimming is already a habit.
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The Sport I Would Like To Practice
I would like to begin practising surfing but I don't live near to the sea, actually, it is to more than three hours by car so it is not a real possibility.In recent years there have been many successful surfers in my country. They have won championships and tournaments around the world. The most known surfer is Sofia Mulanovich, who won one World Championship in the past decade.
The majority of surfers learnt to surf in the north of my country, in that place, there are high waves but I live in the south, where there aren't good waves to surf.
I only practice swimming, four or five times a week, in the mornings, sometimes the weather is cold but swimming is already a habit.
The Sport I Would Like To Practice
I would like to begin practising surfing, but I don't live near to the sea. Actually, it is to more than three hours by car, so it is not a real possibility.
In recent years, there have been many successful surfers in my country. They have won championships and tournaments around the world. The most known surfer is Sofia Mulanovich, who won one World Championship in the past decade.
The majority of surfers learned to surf in the north of my country. In that place there are high waves, but I live in the south where there are no good waves to surf.
I only practice swimming four or five times a week, in the mornings. Sometimes the weather is cold, but swimming is already a habit.
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The Sport I Would Like To Practice
I would like to begin practising start surfing, but I don't live near to the sea, beach. Actually, it is to I live more than three hours away by car, so it is not a real possibility really possible.In recent years, there have been many successful surfers in my country. They have won championships and tournaments around the world. The most well-known surfer is Sofia Mulanovich, who has won one a World Championship in the past decade.
The majority of Most surfers learnt learned how to surf in the north of my country. In that place, There, there are high big waves, but I live in the south, where there aren't any good waves to surf.
I only practice swimming, four or five times a week, in the mornings. Sometimes the weather is cold, but I don't mind because swimming is already a habit.
1. Practising is the British spelling. Not used here in the states. What you said was correct, but "Start surfing" sounds a lot more natural. It also sounds more natural to say the beach instead of the sea when talking about surfing. Think of it this way, the sea is like the middle of the ocean where you are on a boat, and the beach is where people go to surf and do sports.
2. "It's not really possible" sounds more natural than "it's not a real possibility", but both make sense.
3. Using "a" or "an" is better unless you are trying to emphasize that it is only 1 of something. Also, "won one" is harder to say.
4. Learnt is also a British thing, though most people say, "I learned how to surf".
5. When people talk about surfing, they say "big waves" instead of "high waves", but both make sense.
6. You are awesome! Don't say you "only" swim 4-5 times a week. Most people cannot do that! Say something like, "Swimming is my passion, so I don't mind when the water is cold." Something like that. Tell your true story.
Great job! This is awesome! I live in San Diego, CA where there are a lot of surfers. I've surfed a few times, but I would like to learn more. Your English is really good! I just added some stuff to make it sound more natural. Keep up the good work!
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