A poem - My Heart Will Never Allow Me To Be Yours
As I glare at you, your sweet innocent eyes flare up my heart blaming you for all the destabilizations I have
As I brush you aside your impassioned voice retrieves all the feelings which are hidden inside
you may think I have the same feelings as you have
But baby trust me there is a deep gloomy heart that won't let you enter inside
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A poem - My Heart Will Never Allow Me To Be Yours
As I glare at you, your sweet innocent eyes flare up my heart blaming you for all the destabilizations I haveAs I brush you aside, your impassioned voice retrieves all the feelings which are hidden inside
you may think I have the same feelings as you have
But baby, trust me there is a deep gloomy heart that won't let you enter inside
Since this is a poem, you can be more creative than other kinds of writing. I highlighted the word "destabilizations" because it is not commonly used and seems a little awkward. Some better words that are more commonly used are "breakdowns", "panic attacks" or "anxiety".
The sentence "you may think I have the same feelings as you have" could be rewritten as "you may think that I have the same feelings as you". But since this is a poem, I left it as is.
I added a couple of commas. Anyway, good job.
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