A new Hand Made Tool
I have to wind up some reeled 14-silk-floss onto some small bobbins.
The flosses are some dyed fibers which had been reeled from cocoons and had been refined.
I made a handlebar using a wire taken from a clothes hanger yesterday.
It may help me to spin rapidly a bobbin and saves time.
If I did not write this diary, I might have already finished the work. > <
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A New Hand Made Tool
I have to wind up some reeled 14-silk-floss onto some small bobbins.The flosses are some dyed fibers which had been reeled from cocoons and refined.
I made a handle using wire taken from a clothes hanger yesterday.
It helps me to rapidly/quickly spin a bobbin and saves time.
If I had not written this diary, I might have already finished the work. > <
That's a clever idea, the silk looks beautiful. :)
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A new Hand Made Tool
I have to wind up (using only "to wind" seems more common. "to wind up" has several meanings, which can confuse the reader. Well I'm not a native speaker so I feel that way) some reeled (If I understood correctly the silk thread is not already reeled because you precisely want to reel/wrap/wind it unto the bobbin ! ) 14-silk-floss (I don't know anything about silk but if there is 14 silk thread bundles then it's better to write "14 silk-floss") onto some small bobbins.The flosses are some dyed fibers which had ("have" seems appropriate here) been reeled from cocoons and had ("have") been refined.
I made a handlebar using a wire taken from a clothes hanger yesterday.
It may help me to spin rapidly ("rapidly spin") a bobbin and saves time. (If it "saves time", then "it helps" you. If it "may help" you, then it "(may) save time")
If I did not write this diary, I might have already finished the work. > <
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