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Correct this please 1-In fact I am fond of music generally, because it feeds my soul,I used to like slow rock music ,classic music and Latin music.I don't like hard rock music or any loud music.Nowadays I think I have gone off any foreign music,I would rather to focus on listening to Sudanese music. 2-listening to the music makes me feel chilled out ,also it helps me to take a break from the life matters. 3-Sudanese music is quite unique,there is a lot of variety about it,because Sudan has many different tribes,but unfortunately our music still not familiar regionally and globally, it deserves to be heard. 4-From the outside world I like listening to Coldplay,Robbie Williams, my favourite songs are Feel for Robbie Williams and fix you for Coldplay 5-For me Sudanese music is more heart touching.

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1-In fact I am fond of music generally, because it feeds my soul; I used to like slow rock music ,classical music and Latin music.I don't like hard rock music or any loud music.Nowadays I think I have gone off any foreign music; I would rather to focus on listening to Sudanese music.

2-listening to the music makes me feel chilled out; also it also helps me to take a break from the life matters.

3-Sudanese music is quite unique; there is a lot of variety about it, because Sudan has many different tribes. but Unfortunately our music is still not familiar regionally and globally; it deserves to be heard.

4-From the outside world I like listening to Coldplay and Robbie Williams. My favourite songs are Feel for by Robbie Williams and fix you for by Coldplay

5-For me Sudanese music is more heart touching.


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