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An essay. I will be thankful for your correction)) Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with these? 

Every professional in their field has many commitments relevant to their level of responsibility especially medical workers because they are caring for the most important thing, the human life. However sometimes people decline to follow their doctor’s advice (ancountable),( recommendations ) and in this case the responsibility is transferred from doctor to patient. In this essay I’m going to illustrate my opinion by using a case as an exemple. 
I suppose that the medical system should include an educational process for their patients as a part of each treatment offered. It’s known to prevent diseases is easier than to cure it. The patient has a right to know what to expect and how to act in different situations relevant to their health problems. The knowledge gained from the doctor allows the patient to have peace of mind (give them) even those who are struggling with hard health issues. Furthermore awareness about their situation could reduce anxiety or slow the pace of deterioration. 
I will illustrate this statement by the case. Among my aquitances there is the family with a child with cerebral palsy. His diagnose was established when boy had been 1 year means he had had impairments in his movement and mental functions already in early childhood. For providing him with a professional treatment during all his day and night it’s crucial to have a good supply of knowledge that allow to change his body position correctly and to facilitate him to participate in some activities independently as much as possible. Because doctors and specialists for rehabilitation couldn’t be close to this family during 24 hours. Therefore they had started his parents off with establishment of all routine but vital things for his baby and with organisation the environment for him. All caregivers of this boy had been willing to aware to work together for inhibition the possible appearance of secondary decoders or avoid them and for helping this child to be motivated to act independently as he could. 
Summarizing all above I’d like to emphasize that doctors as part of medical system shoudn/t skip over the training side of their treatment and the patients have to come up with a whole idea of wellness and to try to enhance theirs healthy habits and often to follow all doctor’s recommendations.

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