[ 186 A Map Of Statue in Kaohsiung, Taiwan.(9)]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.
There is a birds-eye-view painting of Taiwan’s map of statue at some museum. I’m not quite sure where is located. I’ve ever seen these kinds of a map once in Hokkaido,Japan. The map overwhelmed me.
Hatsusaburo Yoshida who was a Japanese painter made a lo to maps. They are fascinating perspective on the historical landscape of the country and regions.
I can image how was going on the time. I also recognize geography of three dimensions more than any maps.
When I see the nice of view on the high buildings or top of the hill, I enjoy beautiful sceneries and recognize geographic.
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[ 186 A Map Of Statue in Kaohsiung, Taiwan.(9)]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would you go about writing it? Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.There is a birds-eye-view painting of Taiwan’s map displayed at this certain museum. I’m not quite sure where it's located. I’ve seen this kind of a map once in Hokkaido, Japan. I was overwhelmed when I saw the map.
Hatsusaburo Yoshida who was a Japanese painter made a lot of maps. They are fascinating perspective of the historical landscape of the country and regions.
I can imagine the things going on during that time. I also recognized that it shows the geography in three dimension more than any maps.
When I see a nice view from high buildings or on top of the hill, I enjoy watching the beautiful sceneries and landscapes.
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There is a birds-eye-view painting a topographical map of Taiwan’s map of statue at in a some museum. I’m not quite sure where it is located. I’ve ever seen these kinds of a maps once in Hokkaido, Japan. I was overwhelmed by the features on the map. overwhelmed me.
Hatsusaburo Yoshida who was a Japanese cartographer painter who made a lot of lo to maps. They are These maps show a fascinating perspective of on the historical landscape of the country and its regions.
I can imagine the activities of the early inhabitants through the geographical features on the three-dimensional maps more vividly than other maps. how was going on the time. I also recognize geography of three dimensions more than any maps.
When I see the nice of view on the high buildings or top of the hill, I enjoy beautiful sceneries and recognize geographic. (I enjoy the panorama from tall buildings or the summit of a hill and can observe the geographical features of the surrounding areas.)
Hi Hiro,
I tried my best to preserve the meaning of your sentences, though I felt it would be better to re-write the last sentence. I hope you are fine with that.
Cheers
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[ 186 A Map Of Statue in Kaohsiung, Taiwan.(9)]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would you go about writing it? Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.There is a birds-eye-view painting of Taiwan’s map of statue (この句をあまりわかりません) at some a museum. I’m not quite sure where it is located. I’ve never seen these this kinds of a map even once in Hokkaido, Japan. The map overwhelmed me. これを言えます、でも、"The map was overwhelming" と言いますののほうがいいです。
Hatsusaburo Yoshida who was a Japanese painter made a lo to lot of/many maps. They are fascinating perspective on the historical landscape of the country and regions.
I can image how what was going on the time. I also recognize the geography of the three dimensions more than any other maps.
When I see the nice of view on the high buildings or top of the hill, I enjoy the beautiful scenery and recognize geographic (この句もあまりわかりません。)
英語は上手ですね！＾v＾
説明はちょっと漠然だから、特別な地図のついてもっと書かなきゃならないと思います。よくやったね！
英語を勉強するの、頑張って！
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