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About me Hi, my name is Junio and I'm 26 years old. I have two sisters and one brother for part of my mom, and three brothers for part of my dad. I still live with my mom but I intend to live alone when I finish my studies. I'm already graduated in Network Computers and currently I'm studying System Analysis and Development, I will graduate in December 2019. I work in a department store as IT Assistent and I like very much of my job because I have many friends there and I usually travel to nice places to work. In my free time I like to go out with my friends, when I have money, of course. I like to watch movies and series on Netflix, sometimes I play games, and I also like to study idioms by my self, like english and spanish. I have some friends from other countries like United States, Chile, Argentina and Colombia. They help me a lot with their idioms. I study idioms because I wanna travel to other countries, to know new cultures, new places, new friends and maybe live in some diferent country. But for now, know other idiom will help me in my work to have a better salary.

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About me

Hi, my name is Junio and I'm 26 years old. I have two sisters and one brother for part of my mom, and three brothers for part of my dad. I still live with my mom but I intend to live alone when I finish my studies.

--"part of" my mom and dad doesn't make as much sense in English.  Are you saying that these are half-siblings or step-siblings?  


I'm already graduated I have a degree in Network Computers and currently I'm studying System Analysis and Development. , I will graduate in December 2019. I work in a department store as IT Assistant. Assistent and I like my job very much of my job because I have many friends there and I often (or "get to") usually travel to nice places for to work.

--In American English we usually say that we "have a degree in XYZ" instead of "graduated in XYZ."  Sometimes we'll say "I graduated with a Bachelor's (degree) in Computer Science."



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In my free time I like to go out with my friends, when I have money, of course. I like to watch movies and series on Netflix., sSometimes I play games, and I also like to study languages idioms by myself my self, like eEnglish and sSpanish. I have some friends from other countries like the  United States, Chile, Argentina and Colombia. They help me a lot with their languages idioms.

--in English, an idiom is a specific grammatical term; also, in English, we always capitalize the name of a language: Chinese, Portuguese,  French, etc. 

I study languages idioms because I want to wanna travel to other countries, to know new cultures, new places, new friends and maybe even one day live in a some diferent  different country. But for now, studying other languages know other idiom will help me in my work to have a better salary at my job.

--Never use "wanna" (or similar "words" like "gonna", "shoulda", "gotta", etc.) in writing unless it's a very informal  message to a friend or family member. I know that's how we pronounce it, but it's not actually a real word and it looks very incorrect in writing.  I'm trying to think of an example of the same thing in Portuguese, but I don't know the language well enough.  :-)

--You could also say "to increase my salary"

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