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My Language Learning Journey
I started learning English when I was a child, but the quality of the English education that was taught in my school was not good. As a result, I would often forget the material.I decided to start learning English again two years ago on my own. One year later, I started to learn Korean, and soon after that, Spanish. I love to discover a different worlds that aren't my own. I love to discover other cultures, other people, and other mindsets.
I love to learn languages, and I hope to become fluent in these languages and who knows how many others.
My journey learning languages
I started learning english since when I was a child. But the english taught in my school were not good. So I forgot the things were taught me, often.Two years ago, I started one more time to learn english, this time, alone. In the next year, I started to learn korean and months after, spanish. I love to discover a different world that not be my own. I love to discover other cultures, other persons, other mindset.
So today I'm loving to learn languages. And I hope to get fluent in these languages and who knows in more others.
I started learning english since when I was a child.
- Se você usar SINCE ou UNTIL, isso dá uma idéia de continuidade então tem que usar o past perfect tense. Se quiser continuar com a frase então tem que tirar o SINCE. É melhor começar estudando o tempos verbais. Pode ser muito chato de entender mas é um bom começo.
Quando você for tentar escrever, tenta pensar nas tuas intenções e sentimentos que quer passar. Geralmente a gente tenta buscar as palavras equivalentes em português mas isso quase sempre não funciona. Me parece que você tentou achar palavras equivalentes.
So I forgot the things were taught me, often.
Quando queremos falar da nossa infância com saudosismo, usamos o padrão would+verb. Por exemplo: When I was a child I would play soccer with my friends on Sundays. Por isso o Gregory corrigiu dessa forma: I would often forget the material.
Tenta dar uma lida nos discourse markers também. Ajudam muito. O texto fica bem mais fluído e inteligível. Acho que ficaria legal se você colocasse assim: Even so I decided to start learning English again. O Gregory colocou o discourse marker as a resul e acho que ficou muito bem na intenção que você quis passar.
Não sou um professor mas acho que essas dicas podem te ajudar. Boa sorte! ;-)
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