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Large sentence : Please, somebody can help me to check it. After a conversation with Jose, I conclude that his decision to study Finance has been made through a responsible and conscientious analysis and how it fits perfectly with his background in projects and technology.

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Large Long sentence : Please, can somebody can help me (to) check it.

After a conversation with Jose, I conclude that his decision to study finance has been made through a responsible and conscientious analysis and how (that) it fits perfectly with his background in projects and technology.


'that' is optional, but it helps make such a long sentence easier to understand..



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The word finance should not be capitalized. It is only capitalized if it is in a proper noun, such as a course in Public Finance 101 or The Franklin Finance Group.
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Muchas gracias Johnathan ...SOS GRANDE¡¡¡
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Sounds great!

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