writing activity
Greetings everyone, I’m studying to take the Toefl test. The text below is a writing activity that I made first listened to an audio recording once and then, 15 min writing. I would like to receive some comments about my work and I would like to know what do you think about the passage. In a scale 1 to 5, where the five is the greatest and understanding that five isn’t perfect. What qualification would you assign?
and by the way, thank you so much
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The Technology plays an important role in our current society. It has the challenge the solve the nowadays problem and fixes the problems that humans have been accumulating throughout their history. In that sense, the solar energy project in Mekong River and in many other of tributary river show themselves how a great improvement.
Cambodia has been able to organize and improve its solar plants in actually few time, reaching nowadays a production of 6000 mW. It represents an important source of energy and important improvement with respect electric energy produces by hydropower dams. Furthermore, the use of solar energy looks a great economic and eco-friendly alternative. In the last four years, the costs linked with the solar energy has fallen making the solar energy more accessible.
Other important problem in the Area, it’s the use of the territory. The government and experts endorse the idea that solar Energy equipment could be placing on the water in Reservoir Park. Therefore, the use of the land will reduce, a great improvement in contrast to hydropower dams.
The world is changing faster, Asia has been the fastest continent to implement the solar technology. For instance, China plans to put in operation a big solar plant by 2020. In that sense, the solar energy technology has begun to be a global trending.
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writing activity
Greetings everyone, I’m studying to take the Toefl test. The text below is a writing activity that I made first after I listened to an audio recording once and then, 15 min writing. I would like to receive some comments about my work and I would like to know what do you think about the passage. In a scale of 1 to 5, where the five is the highest level and 1 is the lowest level greatest and understanding that five isn’t perfect. What qualification would you assign?and by the way, thank you so much.
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The Technology plays an important role in our current society. It has the challenge of solving the solve the nowadays problem and to fix the problems that humans have been accumulating throughout their history. In that sense, the solar energy project in Mekong River and in many other of tributary rivers show themselves to be how a great improvement.
Cambodia has been able to organize and improve its solar plants in a short period of actually few time, reaching nowadays a production of 6000 mw. It represents an important source of energy and an important improvement with respect to electric energy which is produced by hydropower dams. Furthermore, the use of solar energy looks a great economic and eco-friendly alternative. In the last four years, the costs linked with the solar energy has fallen making the solar energy more accessible.
An other Other important problem in the area, it’s the use of the territory. The government and experts endorse the idea that solar Energy equipment could be placing on the water in Reservoir Park. Therefore, the use of the land will be reduced a great improvement in contrast to hydropower dams.
The world is changing faster, Asia has been the fastest continent to implement the solar technology. For instance, China plans to put in operation a big solar plant by 2020. In that sense, the solar energy technology has begun to be a global trending.
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