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Open School There is a open school almost once a month at my children's school in Japan. The time schedule or the subjects we inspect has already been organized beforehand, therefore, some partners take an hourly off to visit their kids' class. My kids had a open school last Sunday. My two kids go to the local Elementary school. It was luckily held on Sunday so My husband and I could visit the open school together. One of my kids is sixth grade now and had the class which was social studies. They have been learning about Japanese history which is called Jomon period about 15,000 or 2,300 years ago. It was an awesome class . The other kid is fourth grade had an arithmetic class. He is a disabled person so he has just started learning a multiplication. I think he has been doing well so far. We enjoyed visiting their open school.

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^ Open House

There is an open house almost once a month at my *children's school in Japan.

The time schedule or the subjects of the class we #observe inspect has already been are organized beforehand, therefore, some parents partners take an hour off their work hourly off to visit their * children's classes.

My * children's school had an open house last Sunday.
My two * children kids go to the a local elementary school. Luckily, It was luckily held on Sunday so my husband and I could visit the open school together.

One of my kids * children is in sixth grade now and had the was in a @Social Studies class. which was social studies.
They have been learning about the Jomon period of Japanese history which is called Jomon period existed about 15,000 (is there a missing word here?) or 2,300 years ago. It was an awesome class.

The My other * child  kid is in fourth grade and he was in had an arithmetic class. He is a disabled person so he has just started learning a multiplication. I think he has been doing well so far.

We enjoyed visiting their open school during open house. 

Hi Kyouko, 

^ I presume that you are referring to a special day where your children's school grants access to visitors or parents so that they can get a better understanding of how their children are being taught or if they are coping well. If this is your meaning, then you are referring to an "open house". 

* I noticed that you used "children" in your first sentence, so I standardised the rest of your writing by replacing "kids" with "children". "Kids" is a more informal word. 

# I replaced "inspect" with "observe" because we inspect something to diagnose the fault of a problem, and an inspector is usually someone of a higher authority or rank.  I chose "observe" because we observe something in an attempt to learn or gather useful information.

@ I capitalised the first letters as it is a proper noun (title of a subject). 

I hope this helps. 

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Open School

There is an open school day almost once a month at my children's school in Japan.

The time schedule or the subjects we inspect have already been organized beforehand, therefore, some partners take an hour off to visit their kids' class.

My kids had an open school day  last Sunday.
My two kids go to the local Elementary school. It was luckily held on Sunday so
My husband and I could visit the open school day together.

One of my kids is in sixth grade now and had the class which was social studies.
They have been learning about Japanese history which is called Jomon period about 15,000 or 2,300 years ago.
It was an awesome class .

The other kid is in fourth grade had an arithmetic class. He is a disabled person so he has just started learning a multiplication. I think he has been doing well so far.

We enjoyed visiting their open school day.

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