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Hello. I'm Sugaku Kirai. I’m from Fuyuki,Japan. Born and raised. Fuyuki is famous for its oranges and plums. I'm 18 years old. My birthday is December,16th. I'm a student of KB Unilersity. l love drawing pictures and I joined an art club when I was a high school student. Also, I like to appreciate arts by overseas illustrators. I want to improve my English in order to communicate with such people on the internet. We are a family of 5. There are my parents, grandmother, little sister, and me. I'm laid-back so I do things at my own pace. I hope we can get along well. Thank you.
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I'd like you to check and correct my self-introduction.
Hello, I'm Sugaku Kirai. I was born and raised in Fuyuki, Japan. Fuyuki is famous for its oranges and plums. I'm 18 years old, my birthday is December 16th.
Currently I'm a student of KB university. In highschool I joined an art club because I love drawing. Also I like to appreciate art from overseas illustrators. I want to improve my English so I can communicate with people on the internet. There are 5 people in my family, my parents, grandmother, little sister, and me. I'm laid-back so I do things at my own pace. I hope we can get along well, thank you.
Hello, I'm Sugaku Kirai. I was born and raised in Fuyuki, Japan. Fuyuki is famous for its oranges and plums. I'm 18 years old, my birthday is December 16th.
Currently I'm a student of KB university. In highschool I joined an art club because I love drawing. Also I like to appreciate art from overseas illustrators. I want to improve my English so I can communicate with people on the internet. There are 5 people in my family, my parents, grandmother, little sister, and me. I'm laid-back so I do things at my own pace. I hope we can get along well, thank you.
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I'd like you to check and correct this report about my self-introduction
Hello. I'm Sugaku Kirai. I’m from Fuyuki, Japan. Born and raised. Fuyuki is famous for its oranges and plums. I'm 18 years old. My birthday is December 16th. I'm a student of KB University. l love to drawing pictures and I joined an art club when I was a high school student. Also, I also like to appreciate arts by overseas illustrators.I want to improve my English in order to communicate with such people on the internet.
We are a family of 5.
In my family there are 5 people / There are 5 people in my family.
There are My parents, grandmother, little sister, and me. I'm laid-back so I do things at my own pace. I hope we can get along well. Thank you.
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Sorry. Messed this up and it won't allow me to edit again. Will redo.
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