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Today :) Today, I went to the house of my host family’s cousin:) I ate a lot of delicious food then so I’m still full haha my host family often take me party:) I can experience the culture of NZ, Maori and Samoa then:) it’s very good experience but I don’t have a friend there. So, whenever I go, I feel lonely. I’m shy and it is difficult for me to talk to first:( I wanna get closer to them more, but I cannot still get out of my shell. it’s my weak point and problem.

Please correct this sentences if I’m wrong or it’s not natural.

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Today, I went to the house of my host family's cousin :) I ate a lot of delicious food then, so I'm still full haha

{
My host family often takes me to parties.
My host family often takes me places.
My host family often takes me to family gatherings.
}

I can experience the culture of NZ, Maori, and Samoa then :)

{
These are good experiences but I don't have friends here.
These are good experiences but I don't have a single friend here.
}

So wherever I go, I feel lonely. I'm shy and it's difficult for me to start a conversation first :(
I want to become closer with them but I still can't escape my shell. It's my problematic weak point.

Please correct these sentences if I made a mistake or if it's not natural.

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