My best holiday in a cruise
Hi everyone,
Today I was remembering about a cruise I made two years ago. I am a travel agent and I have made a lot of cruises but this one was amazing. I was with my boyfriend at the biggest ship around the world at that moment. The ship´s name is Harmony of the Seas from the Royal Caribbean company.
The ship was very big. It had a small Central Park like en New York city. It was amazing. At the park you could take a walk, eat something or simply to be seat in a bench listening music and little birds.
At night you could see shows as Grease Musical or another shows in the Ice rink . Music, dancers and singers were amazing.
About the itinerary I can say you that was a Mediterranean route. We stopped in Rome, Florence, Naples, Mallorca and Marseille and we made very interesting excursions.
Thanks for reading me and i hope you can correct my mistakes in this text.
Have a nice day.
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My best holiday was on a cruise
Hi everyone,Today I was remembering thinking about a cruise I made took two years ago. I am a travel agent and I have been on many made a lot of cruises, but this one was amazing. I was with my boyfriend, on the biggest ship in around the world at the time. that moment. The ship´s name is "Harmony of the Seas" from the Royal Caribbean company.
The ship was very big. It had a small "Central Park" like in New York City. It was amazing. In the park, you could take a walk, eat something or simply sit to be seat on a bench listening to the music and little birds.
At night you could see shows such as "Grease" the Musical or other shows on the Ice rink. The music, dancers, and singers were amazing.
As for About the itinerary, I will can say you that it was a Mediterranean route. We stopped in Rome, Florence, Naples, Mallorca, and Marseille and we took made very interesting excursions.
Thanks for reading my entry and I hope you can correct my mistakes in this text.
Have a nice day.
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My best holiday in a cruise
Hi everyone,Today I was remembering remembered about a cruise I made which I went on two years ago. I am a travel agent and I have made been on a lot of cruises but this one was amazing. I was with my boyfriend at on the biggest ship (at that moment) around the world at that moment. The ship´s name is Harmony of the Seas from and forms part of the Royal Caribbean company.
The ship was very big. It had a small Central Park like en the one in New York city. It was amazing. At the park you could take a walk, eat something or simply to be seat in sit on a bench listening to music and little birds.
At night you could see shows such as Grease Musical. or another shows in the Ice rink . The Ice Rink also hosted some shows (creo que en esta forma, la frase aparece mejor) The Music, dancers and singers were amazing.
About the itinerary I can say you that it was a Mediterranean route. We stopped in Rome, Florence, Naples, Mallorca and Marseille and we made went on very interesting excursions.
Thanks for reading me and i hope you can correct my mistakes in this text.
Have a nice day.
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