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Global Warming III In my opinion, governments play a more significant role in stopping climate change than individuals do. Not because individuals aren’t enthusiastic enough, they simply don’t have the means to do it. Most of pollution is caused by big corporations that, in order to make profit as big as possible, are not environmentally friendly. What is more, many households either. The government could stop such behaviors by creating restrictions on carbon emissions and increasing taxes on unseparated waste. It is true, however, that even ordinary people can do their part of job in stopping climate change by presenting their friends or neighbours with their green lifestyles. But it is hard to recycle when there are no recycling bins around and you can’t stop using your car without efficient and reliable public transportation. Governments often fail not only to enforce environmental laws, they also proved to be unable to provide citizens with means to, for example, separate waste. And even though I believe that all changes have to come within ourselves, stopping climate change requires cooperation of both the leaders of the country and its citizens as it is an issuer that affects and will affect lives of us all. And it is up to the individuals to demand actions from their government.

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Global Warming III

In my opinion, governments play a more significant role in stopping climate change than individuals do. Not because individuals aren’t enthusiastic enough, they simply don’t have the means to do it. Most of pollution is caused by big corporations that, in order to make profit as big as possible, are not environmentally friendly. What is more, many households either. The government could stop such behaviors by creating restrictions on carbon emissions and increasing taxes on unseparated waste.

It is true, however, that even ordinary people can do their part of job in stopping climate change by presenting their friends or neighbours with their green lifestyles. But It is hard to recycle when there are no recycling bins around and you can’t stop using your car without efficient and reliable public transportation. Governments often fail not only to enforce environmental laws, they also proved to be unable to provide citizens with means to, for example, separate waste.

And Even though I believe that all changes have to come within ourselves, stopping climate change requires cooperation of both the leaders of the country and its citizens as it is an issuer that affects and will affect the  lives of us all. And It is up to the individuals to demand actions from their government.

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Global Warming III

In my opinion, governments play a more significant role in stopping climate change than individuals do. Not because individuals aren’t enthusiastic enough, they simply don’t have the means to do so. Most pollution is caused by big corporations that, in order to maximise profits, are not environmentally friendly. Furthermore, many households are not environmentally friendly, either. The government could stop such behaviours by imposing restrictions on carbon emissions and increasing taxes on unseparated waste.

It is true, however, that even ordinary people can play their part in stopping climate change by showing their friends or neighbours their green lifestyles. But it is hard to recycle when there are no recycling bins around, and you can’t stop using your car without efficient and reliable public transportation. Governments often fail not only to enforce environmental laws, they have also proven unable to provide citizens with means to, for example, separate waste.

And although I believe that all changes have to come from within ourselves, stopping climate change requires the cooperation of both the leaders of the country and its citizens, as it is an issue that affects us all. It is up to the individuals to demand action from their governments.
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Global Warming III

In my opinion, governments play a more significant role in stopping climate change than individuals do, not because individuals aren’t enthusiastic enough--they simply don’t have the means to do it. Most pollution is caused by big corporations that, in order to make as large a profit as possible, are not environmentally friendly. What is more, many households are not either. The government could stop such behaviors by creating restrictions on carbon emissions and increasing taxes on unsorted waste.

It is true, however, that even ordinary people can do their part to stop climate change by helping their friends or neighbours with cultivate green lifestyles. But it is hard to recycle when there are no recycling bins around, and you can’t stop using your car without efficient and reliable public transportation. Governments often fail not only to enforce environmental laws, they also prove to be unable to provide citizens with the means to, for example, separate waste.

And even though I believe that all changes have to come within ourselves, stopping climate change requires cooperation of both the leaders of the country and its citizens, as it is an issue that affects and will affect lives of us all. And it is up to individuals to demand actions from their government.

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