我的假期故事
今天是我假期的第一天。我做一个巧克力的蛋糕。而且打扫我的家。晚上决定去听唱诗班。虽然回家的时候已经很晚，但是我看一本科幻小说 － 我最喜欢的类型。终于刷牙。为了睡着，我听音乐。一共这个天厉害。
What it's meant to say (and no, this isn't an actual day, I just wanted to use some new vocab I'd been learning ;) )
Today is the first day of my holiday. I bake a chocolate cake. Then I clean my home. In the evening I decide to listen to a choir. Although it is already late when I return home, I read a scifi novel - my favourite genre. Finally I brush my teeth. In order to fall asleep, I listen to music. All told, the day was awesome.
谢谢!
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我的假期故事
今天是我假期的第一天。我做一个巧克力的蛋糕，並且打扫我的家。晚上决定去听唱诗班。虽然回家的时候已经很晚，但是我還是看了一本科幻小说 － 是我最喜欢的类型。最後刷牙。为了睡着，我听音乐。一共这个天厉害不管怎麼說今天太棒了。What it's meant to say (and no, this isn't an actual day, I just wanted to use some new vocab I'd been learning ;) )
Today is the first day of my holiday. I bake a chocolate cake. Then I clean my home. In the evening I decide to listen to a choir. Although it is already late when I return home, I read a scifi novel - my favourite genre. Finally I brush my teeth. In order to fall asleep, I listen to music. All told, the day was awesome.
谢谢!
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终于=Eventually， means in the end, especially after a lot of delays, problems, or arguments.
So in your context, instead of "终于"，you should use "最后" or “最终”， which is used to refer the end of a situation or process, the last in a list of things.
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我的假期故事
今天是我假期的第一天。我做一个巧克力的蛋糕。而且打扫我的家。晚上决定去听唱诗班。虽然回家的时候已经很晚，但是我看一本科幻小说 － 我最喜欢的类型。终于刷牙。为了睡着，我听音乐。一共这个天厉害。（总之，今天太棒了）What it's meant to say (and no, this isn't an actual day, I just wanted to use some new vocab I'd been learning ;) )
Today is the first day of my holiday. I bake a chocolate cake. Then I clean my home. In the evening I decide to listen to a choir. Although it is already late when I return home, I read a scifi novel - my favourite genre. Finally I brush my teeth. In order to fall asleep, I listen to music. All told, the day was awesome.
谢谢!
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