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I have a gobling in my house it hide me every things, when i come to my house i put the keys on the same place. when i wake up at the next morning and i want to leave the house, i can´t to find them. the same happend with anything else. i was wish to ride my bike and i could was not find my glasses and hat. and so on. and when actualy i don´t need the keys, the glasses, the hat, i find them in the place when i was put them before. could you please advice me what to do in this case for stop this? thank for corrections and answers Omar

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I have a goblin in my house

It hides * all of my things. When I come home I always put the keys in the same place, but 
when I wake up * the next morning and I go to leave the house, I can´t * find them. The same happens with everything else.

I wanted to ride my bike and I could *not find my glasses and hat, and so on.

And when *  I don´t actually need the keys, the glasses, the hat, I find them in the place where I put them before.

Could you please advise me on what to do in this case to stop this?

Thanks for any corrections and answers.

Omar
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I Have a Goblin in My House

It hides all my things. When I come home I always put my keys in the same place, but when I wake up the next morning and want to leave the house, I can´t to find them.

The same thing happens with everything else. When I want to ride my bike, I can't find my glasses or hat, and so on. (When/whenever makes it sound like the goblin does all the time, instead of just once.) Then, when I don't actually need my keys, glasses, or hat, I find them where I put them in the first place.

Could you please advise me what to do in order to stop this?

thanks for the corrections and answers

Omar

1. "In the first place" is a phrase that means "originally" or "at first". (Like en primer lugar/desde el principio in Spanish). It is perfect for your story, because it's colloquial and adds irony.

2. Good luck with your goblin problem. Maybe he's just hungry and looking for a snack. :)

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Omar, ALWAYS capitalize the pronoun "I" . NEVER use the lower-case "i". Also, ALWAYS capitalize the first letter of a sentence (the first letter after a period). ----- I have goblins in my house too :)

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