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IELTS 10 General Training Reading and Writing Test A Task 2 Writing Tast 2 (used 48 minutes, 229 words) In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? The crime rate increasing in many countries has never been so obvious during recent ten years. To tell the true reasons of this phenomenon is very important. In my opinion, there are three main problems that lead to the high rate of crime. First, people are losing jobs. Due to many uncontroable factors, such as war and economic problem, companies in many countries cannot make enough profit. In order to keep alive, managers have to reduce the number of their employees. Then, poor quality of education cannot teach students to achieve their life goals properly. Young generation is exposed under violet video games, meaningless entertament and unhealthy films. In that way, teenagers have missed their best oppertunity to build their skills at a early age. Last but not least, economic problem make residents poor. One percent of population owns ninty percent of wealth, which means unbalanced economic development has taken people's right to live with enough money in their pockets. apparently, illigal ways has been used to grab money. To reduce the enormal rate of crime, The government should strengthen the high education, giving young people more chances to broaden their horizons so as to earn lives by theirselves. It is also important that measures should be taken to rebalance the salary of each individuals. By increasing employment rate, government should make everybody afford to their own lives.

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