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IELTS 10 General Training Reading and Writing Test A Writing Tast 1 (used 28 minutes) You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter 1. give details of your study plans 2. explain why you want to get a part-time job 3. suggest how your friend could help you find a job Dear Mike, Finally I am going to Canada to complite my post-secondary study of Fitness. I write to ask you to help me find my future part-time job. As you know, I am a super fan of working out. It is my dream to become a personal Trainer for a long time. During the next two years, I will learn many useful knowledge to realize my career goal. To get a part-time job in a local gym seems a good way to help me get envolved in the fitness industry at a early time. Besides, I could make some money to reduce the economic burden of my family. It has been five years since you came to this beautiful country. I believe you have been familiar with the daily life here and you must have known many effective ways to find a proper job. I am looking forward to meet you in a brand new place sharing the stories for these years. Yours, Leon Please grade me if it is okay, thank you!

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IELTS 10 General Training Reading and Writing Test A

Writing Task 1 (used 28 minutes)

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. give details of your study plans
2. explain why you want to get a part-time job
3. suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Mike,

I am finally going to Canada to complete my post-secondary study in Fitness. I am writing to ask if you could help me find a part-time job.

As you know, I am a fitness fanatic, and It's been my dream to become a Personal Trainer for a long time. During the next two years, I will learn many useful skills knowledge to realize my career goals.

Getting a part-time job in a local gym seems like a good way to help me get involved in the fitness industry at an early stage. I could also make some money to reduce the economic burden on my family at the same time.

It has been five years since you moved to that* beautiful country. I believe you are familiar with the daily life there* and you must have that you know the most effective ways to find a job.

I am looking forward to meeting you in a brand new country, sharing the stories of the past.

Yours,

Leon

Please grade me if it is okay, thank you!

* You are not in Canada yet at the time of writing, so you cannot use "this" and "here".

Very good Leon.

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