My note
Please correct my sentence,
Smile often increse your life be more colorful.
you try to find tiny happiness every moments, then you will find big happiness.
Listen to your heart, listen to your voice.
Do not try to change people around you. That is waste of your time.
Thank you!
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My note
Please correct my sentence,Smile often increse your life be more colorful.
you try to find tiny happiness every moments, then you will find big happiness.
Listen to your heart, listen to your voice.
Do not try to change people around you. That is waste of your time.
Thank you!
I hope this helps and is what you were trying to say:
Smile often and share yourself with those around you.
Try to find joy in everyday moments
Listen to your heart's voice.
Do not try to change the people around you. That is a waste of your time.
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My note
Please correct my sentence,Smile often increse your life be more colorful.
you try to find tiny happiness every moments, then you will find big happiness.
Listen to your heart, listen to your voice.
Do not try to change people around you. That is waste of your time.
Thank you!
Smiling often makes your life more colorful.
If you find a little happiness in each moment, you will find great happiness for them all.
Listen to your heart; listen to your voice.
Do not try to change people around you. That is a waste of your time.
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