kite...

Every dry season, kids love to play fly kites. In the dry season the wind blows harder, and certainly there was is certainly no rain. In my place Where I'm from, kites is are not for a girls but it they is are a boy's toys. When I was child I really wanted to play fly a kite, I nagged to my father so that I could play fly a  kite. At that time, the boys in my neighborhood didn’t want to share his their kites to with me, yeah…boys is are so annoying. they felt most fabulous in every way. My father was never told that the kite is a game toy for boys, My father believed that if something is good for men it is also good for women and if something is bad for men it is also bad for women. Then my father asked me to make a kite together with him. after When the kite was finished, we were flying flew the kites in the yard. Actually, compared to played flying a kite I'd enjoyed making kites more because of the creative process like cutting, pasting, after the kite was finished I colored it with bright colors to make it look beautiful in a blue dry season sky ...

just a few issues with plural verbs and personal pronouns. Also, in English we fly a kite not play them :) this was an enjoyable story to read though :D Bex x