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Applying for Australian Visa in the embassy Part 2 I am taking an English course in the SMART language academy but it is not enough with an English course here in Colombia due it is necessary to understand and develop my fluency level in a way more similar to the native one, I made the decision to apply for an English course in Australia because it is an English speaking country and its language teaching schools have a high academic level. The school that I chose to study English is Imagine Education Australia because it is a recognized school with experience in teaching the language, which provides a lot of support to its students with a practical and interactive methodology, where I can and put into practice the English language both with the students of this school and with the native people. July 15 was the date that I chose to start my English course in Australia mainly because I plan to start the Masters of Materials and processes of the National University of Colombia in the academic semester 2019-I, so this semester is the indicated to focus on my English studies and be able to return as a bilingual professional to Colombia. Australia is a country that is widely spoken in all media, where it is shown that it is a country with a high academic level and teaching, which has wonderful tourist destinations to know where people are very kind. Because I worked for two years in CEMENTOS ARGOS S.A. I have the opportunity to be able to afford my trip on my own due the income in that company allowed me to save enough money to travel, during my time saving I kept my money in a fiduciary of Bancolombia bank, which generated certain interests and allowed me to keep my money safe. I am characterized for being a responsible, kind and confident person, who has always been motivated by studies and have a better academic education. My long-term aspirations are to be able to finish my Masters in Materials and Processes at the National University of Colombia, so I can later contribute as a high level professional in the sustainable development of my country and raise awareness among people that Colombia is a country of great opportunities and that for this we must study and be qualified, in order to achieve a better quality of life and job opportunities in my country.

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Hola Raúl, me permití realizar algunas correcciones y modificaciones a parte de tu texto, para que suene más natural. De todas maneras ten en cuenta que no soy un nativo de Inglés y también puedo cometer errores. Saludos.

I am learning English at Smart Language Accademy in Colombia, but I think is not enough to develop a high listening and speaking level, in a similar way to a native one.

Because of that, I made the decision to apply for an English course in Australia, which is known to be an English-speaking country with high academic standards.

The school that I chose is Imagine Education Australia, which is a recognized academy with a lot of experience that provides support to its students, and quality teaching with a practical and interactive methodology.

I truly believe that in Australia I’ll put into practice my language with both, students and natives.


Te recomiendo que prestes atención a los tiempos verbales y a las estructuras gramaticales, evitando redundancias.

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