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アシュリーのノート 今私は飛行機の中で韓国へ行く、ここは私の初めて韓国で旅行する。飛行機のトイレはたぶん4階へ行きました。飛行機員は韓国のテンプルザは15度といました。ソウルは1週間います、お国へ帰りの前にブサンは2か月

います。

I'm now on a plane to Korea, it's my first trip to Korea. I went to the toilet about 4 times while in the plane. The pilot said the temperature of Korea is a 15degrees. I will be in Seoul for a week. Before going back to my country, I will be in Busan for 2 months.

Hey guys, thanks for reading my entry. Please help me correct my grammar/ kanji usage of words to make it sound more native [emoji] お願いします

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今、私は韓国行きの飛行機の中です。私の初めての韓国旅行です。飛行機の中でトイレに4回行きました。パイロットは韓国の気温は15度と言いました。ソウルには1週間います。帰国前にブサンに2か月滞在します。

I'm now on a plane to Korea, it's my first trip to Korea. I went to the toilet about 4 times while in the plane. The pilot said the temperature of Korea is a 15degrees. I will be in Seoul for a week. Before going back to my country, I will be in Busan for 2 months.

Hey guys, thanks for reading my entry. Please help me correct my grammar/ kanji usage of words to make it sound more native [emoji] お願いします

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