The Love

Yesterday I had to go to pick up a fertilizer a little bit late...
I asked to  my wife ....
"My love,
Do you want to go with me to pick up it?" ... and
she said,
"Yes, I do."

We went to looking for the fertilizer and we returned home very late.
My wife took a shower and went to sleep.

I made some things before going to bed ...
when I went to my room, I found my wife deeply asleep. (or you could also say "in a deep sleep" or "sleeping deeply")

Her body was covered by a blanket, but her feet were uncovered.
Carefully I covered her feet and I took the chance to contemplate her....
She was beautiful, with that inner peace, like an angel....
I thought of all the wonderful things that she does for me...
especially all her love for this simple man.

After a time, I settled into bed to sleep without waking her...
but she turned towards me and with sweetness she hugged me
and she said good night with a whisper. 

In that moment I thought that I am definitely a lucky man
because I have the most beautiful gift in the world...
The love

What a lovely post you have written about your wife. Well done! 

Yesterday I had to go to pick up a fertilizer a litle be late...
I ask to my wife ....
my love ,
Do you want to go with my to pick up it, ... and
she says ,
yes I do

We went to loking for the fertilizer and we returned very late at home,
my wife took a shower and went to sleep
I made some things before go to bed, ...
when I went to my room, I found my wife deep sleep ..

her body was covered by a blanket, but her feet was descovered..
carefuly I covered her feet and I take the chance to comtemplate her....
She was beautiful, with that inner peace, like an angel....
I thought in all the wonder things that she do for my...
in special all her love for this simple man.

after a time, I settled in a bed to sleep without waking her...
but she turned towards me and with sweetness she hug me
and She says good nigth with a whisper ..

In that momento I thought, that definaly I am lucky man
because I have the much beautiful gift the world ..
The love

the sentenses are all in past ..so all verbs shoul be written in the past .
lovely and best wishes for you 

the love

Yesterday I had to go to pick up a fertilizer a little bit late...
I ask to my wife ....
my love ,
Do you want to go with me to pick up it, ... and
she says ,
yes I do

We went to look for the fertilizer and we returned very late at home,
my wife take a shower and go to sleep
I make some things before go to bed, ...
when I went to my room, I found my wife deep sleep ..

her body was covered by a blanket, but her feet was descovered..
carefuly I covered her feet and I take the chance to comtemplate her....
She was beautiful, with that inner peace, like an angel....
I thought in all the wonder things that she do for my...
in special all her love for this simple man.

after a time, I settled in a bed to sleep without waking her...
but she turned towards me and with sweetness she hug me
and She says good night with a whisper ..

In that moment I thought, that definitely I am a lucky man
because I have the most beautiful gift the world ..
The love

This is beautiful and heart-warming.