please help me correct it Dear sir I am writing about the bank staff. Weekday, the bank's clients schedule multiple appointments with the bank staff to make banking movements. In addition to this, i

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please help me correct it Dear sir I am writing about the bank staff. Weekday, the bank's clients schedule multiple appointments with the bank staff to make banking movements. In addition to this, i want to notify about the slower service attention caused by the shortage of bank staff. Please help us to have a better customer service and a lower workload in the bank staff. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully

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please help me correct it

Dear sir,
I am writing about the bank staff. During weekdays, the bank's clients schedule multiple appointments with the bank staff to make banking transfers. In addition to this, I want to notify you about the slower service attention caused by the shortage of bank staff. Please help us to have a ( "a" is not needed here) better customer service and a lower workload for the bank staff.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,

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