Someland's Main Exports (IELTS Writing task 1)
The bar chart below illustrates the performance of Someland’s exports for three different products in 2005,2015 and future projections for 2025.
Regarding Meat products, the initial 4 USD billion exports had a drop of about 0.5 USD billion over 10 years, and these are expected to steadily go down to 3 billion in 2025.
Dairy products featured the opposite trend. The exports peaked 8 USD billion with a growth of 3.5 billion in the same time window as before. Future projections suggest that the profit may slightly go down by 0.5 billion.
Lastly, International tourism exports raised to 7 billion from an initial profit of about 6 billion. In the next 10 years they are supposed to reach the same figures as Dairy products showed in 2015.
In conclusion, Someland company did not perform well on meat products, whereas succeeded in exporting Dairy products and International tourism. In regard to the future trends, the company is likely to increase the selling of international tourism, maintain the exporting level of Dairy products, and continue to lower the Meat trade abroad.
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Someland's Main Exports (IELTS Writing task 1)
The bar chart below illustrates the performance of Someland’s exports for three different products in 2005, 2015 and future projections for 2025.Regarding meat*** products, the initial 4 USD billion exports had a drop of about 0.5 USD billion over 10 years, and these are expected to steadily go down to 3 billion in 2025.
Dairy products featured the opposite trend. The exports peaked at 8 USD billion with a growth of 3.5 billion in the same time window as before. Future projections suggest that the exports* may slightly go down by 0.5 billion.
Lastly, international tourism exports raised to 7 billion from an initial value* of about 6 billion. In the next 10 years they are supposed to reach the same figures as dairy products showed in 2015.
In conclusion, Someland company** did not perform well on meat products, whereas succeeded in exporting dairy products and International tourism. In regard to the future trends, the company** is likely to increase the selling of international tourism, maintain the exporting level of dairy products, and continue to lower the meat trade abroad.
[* The graph did not label these values as profits. Typically such values represent the total money received from the exports, not the profits made on them.
** Someland is probably a geographical area or a country instead of a business. To be safe it is probably better to leave the first "company" out and use "it" instead of "the company" for the second instance.
*** The words meat, dairy, and international are capitalized in the graph because they are used as titles, however these are not proper names so should not be capitalized in other text. ]
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