My last holidays Hi, this is an excercise for an English Institute. Hope you can correct me. Slogan: Write a short paragraph describing what you did in your last holiday: where did you go? Who diid y

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My last holidays Hi, this is an excercise for an English Institute. Hope you can correct me. Slogan: Write a short paragraph describing what you did in your last holiday: where did you go? Who diid you meet? What was the weather like? Use the mes vocabularie from excercise two. -----> (It means that I have to use some words from another excercise.) Write at least five sentences. Verbs that I had to use: (not necesarily all of these verbs) have- book- buy- sunbothe- rent- hire In my last holiday I spent a lot of time in my computer and they were warm days. I met so many people who talked by a website named Italki. I went two times to Cardiel with my family and I sunbothe a little bit. We also bought a lot of ice cream. In those days, it was the dad's birthday, and mine. I thought of booking a restaurant for my birthday but I didn't do It. We had a great party.

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My last holidays

Hi, this is an excercise for an English Institute. Hope you can correct me.
Slogan: Write a short paragraph describing what you did in your last holiday: where did you go? Who diid you meet? What was the weather like? Use the mes vocabularie from excercise two. -----> (It means that I have to use some words from another excercise.) Write at least five sentences.
Verbs that I had to use: (not necesarily all of these verbs) have- book- buy- sunbothe- rent- hire

In During my last holiday, I spent a lot of time in on my computer and they were warm days it was warm. I met so many people who talked by on a website named called Italki. ((or you can write: "I met a lot of people on a website called Italk and talked to them."))))
I went two times to Cardiel with my family two times, and I sunbothe sunbathed a little bit. We also bought ate a lot of ice cream.
In those days, it was the dad's birthday, and mine. (((((I'm not sure what this means...I'm guessing it means "We celebrated my birthday and my dad's birthday during the holidays.")))))) I thought of booking a restaurant for my birthday but I didn't do It. We had a great party. ((((this is not wrong, but it's little bit awkward. I would write something like this: "I had thought about booking a restaurant for my birthday, but didn't. Nevertheless, we had a great party.")))))))

In my last holiday I spent a lot of time in my computer and they were warm days. I met so many people who talked by a website named Italki.

Corrected: During my last holiday, I spent a lot of time on my computer, and it was warm. I met many people who talked through a website called Italki.
The last holiday was a period of time, not a moment, so one would say "during".
"On" a computer is just how we say it in English. I don't think there's a reason for it.
"They were warm days" doesn't work because you didn't say "the days" earlier. It's a lot easier to say "It was warm"
When you're trying to say "using", we usually say "through" when specifying the way that people communicate.
"named" applies to people, pets, etc. "called" sounds more natural with things.

I went two times to Cardiel with my family and I sunbothe a little bit. We also bought a lot of ice scream.In those days, it was the dad's birthday, and mine. I thought of booking a restaurant for my birthday but I didn't do It. We had a great party.

Corrected: I went two times to Cardiel with my family and sunbathed a little bit. We also bought a lot of ice cream. My dad's birthday and my birthday both passed during the vacation. I thought of booking a restaurant for my birthday but I didn't do it. We had a great party.

Past tense of sunbathe - sunbathed
Ice cream - find "ice" and "cream" in your dictionary, it'll make "ice cream" easier to remember!
"In those days" actually means something like "in that era". It implies a much longer time. Furthermore, if you don't use a verb like "passed", it sounds a bit like your birthday occurred during the entire vacation. Finally, in English, you say "my dad" instead of "the dad". This works the same way with all family.

I hope this helped!

My last holidays

Hi, this is an excercise for an English Institute. I hope you can correct me.
Prompt: Write a short paragraph describing what you did on your last holiday: where did you go? Who diid you meet? What was the weather like? Use the most vocabulary from excercise two that you can. -----> (It means that I have to use some words from another excercise.) Write at least five sentences.
Verbs that I had to use: (not necesarily all of these verbs) have- book- buy- sunbathe- rent- hire

On my last holiday I spent a lot of time on my computer and It was warm. I met so many people who talked through a website called Italki.
I went two times to Cardiel with my family and I sunbathed a little bit. We also bought a lot of ice cream.
In those days, it was my and my dad's birthday. I thought about booking a restaurant for my birthday but I didn't do It. We had a great party.

My last holidays

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