The ending of a story from the student's book. Home task
When he saw the Rowan's right ankle. he realised that the problem was even more serious that he had thought. They were far from the camp, at least an hour and a half, moreover, the night was falling. They didn't have enough supplies for staying right there and of course, Rowan needed help as soon as possible, in this case, it was dangerous to stay there for a night. They should get to the camp in any way.
Firstly, Chris tried to get the trap off, but he failed because the thrones of the trap slammed firmly into the ankle and Rowan cried out in pain. at the same time without getting it off they could not move further. Chris tried one more time to move the trap off and luckily he's done it. fortunately, his ankle was not completely crushed, but the pain was intense. When Rowan tried to stand he fell down with pain, he could not even move his ankle neither stood on it. So Chris had to carry Rowan. They left almost all their supplies, only took water and fire. An hour later it became absolutely dark but they went only a hundred meters. Chris was too tired to carry on Rawon. They stopped to take a breath and to relax. However, at the time it was becoming more and more dangerous as well as they heard lots of noises and they were pretty frightening. They knew that there was not a decision in that situation to stay there so they stood and went further. About two hours later they got back to the camp. Everybody was worried about their absence, even more, they started thinking something dreadful had happened. Thank goodness it was a happy ending.
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The ending of a story from a student's book. Home task
When he saw the Rowan's right ankle he realised that the problem was even more serious that he had thought. They were far from the camp, at least an hour and a half, moreover night was falling. They didn't have enough supplies to stay there and of course, Rowan needed help as soon as possible. In this case, it was dangerous to stay there for a night. They should get to the camp in any way.Firstly, Chris tried to remove the trap but he failed because the teeth of the trap snapped back firmly into the ankle and Rowan cried out in pain. At the same time, without getting it off they could go no further. Chris tried one more time to remove the trap and luckily he it came away. Fortunately, his ankle was not completely crushed, but the pain was intense. When Rowan tried to stand he fell down with pain, he could neither move his ankle nor stand on it. So Chris had to carry him. They left almost all their supplies, only taking water and fire. An hour later it was absolutely dark and the covered only a hundred meters. Chris was too tired to carry Raw on. They stopped to take a breath and to relax. However, at the time it was becoming more and more dangerous as well and they heard lots of noises and they were pretty frightening. They knew that there was no choice but to continue on. About two hours later they got back to camp. Everybody was worried about their absence, even more, they had begun to think something dreadful had happened. Thank goodness it was a happy ending.
Very well written!
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Thanks:)
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I've enjoyed reading it
thanks for your writing ^-^
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