Do you think that school should teach subjects such as painting and photography? I think all schools should teach these subjects because they help to develop different skills like creativity or concen

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Do you think that school should teach subjects such as painting and photography? I think all schools should teach these subjects because they help to develop different skills like creativity or concentration. Also they are more enjoyable and relaxed than other subjects such as maths or language. On the other hand, some students could want to work as a painter or photographer in their future. For these reasons I think these subjects should be compulsory, not voluntary while children study at school.

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Do you think that school should teach subjects such as pPainting and pPhotography?

I think all schools should teach these subjects because they help to develop different skills like creativity or concentration. Also they are more enjoyable and relaxing than other subjects such as Maths or Language. On the other hand Moreover, these subjects might encourage some students could want to work as a painter or photographer in their future. For these reasons, I think these subjects should be compulsory, not voluntary while children study at all schools.

Note: 1. Painitng, Photography, Math and Language are proper nouns ( names of the subject) and should therefore be capitalized.

2. It is better to use the word "Moreover" here, because you are stating another statement that supports your assertion.

Do you think that school should teach subjects such as painting and photography?

I think all schools should teach these subjects because they help to develop different skills, like creativity or concentration. Also, they are more enjoyable and relaxeding than other subjects such as maths or languages. On the other hand (BETTER: In addition,), some students could might want to work as a painter or photographer in their future. For these reasons I think these subjects should be compulsory, not voluntary while for children studying at school.

(Muy bien!)

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