Diner with my sister
I went to dinner with my little sister on friday.
Last time when I met her, she had very long beautiful hair, But when I met her on Friday, her hair become very short! I was so surprised and asked her "what happened with you?" Then her answered "I did hair donation."
She used to working as a nurse and quit because her husband had to go UK for studying. 2years later she came back with her husband but she hasn't return to job as nurse yet. she told me that even she can't work now, she want to do something for sick people. i was moved her beautifuk will.
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Dinner with my sister
I went to dinner with my little sister on Friday.Last time when I met her, she had very long beautiful hair, But when I met her on Friday, her hair was / had become very short! I was so surprised and asked her "what happened with you?" Then she answered "I did a hair donation." (or you could write, "I donated my hair.")
She used to working as a nurse and quit because her husband had to go UK to studying. 2years later she came back with her husband but she hasn't returned to her job as nurse yet. she told me that even though she can't work now, she wants to do something for sick people. I was moved her beautiful will.
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Dinner with my sister
I went to dinner with my little sister on Friday.Last time when I met her, she had very long, beautiful hair, but when I met her on Friday, her hair had become very short! I was so surprised and asked her "What happened
She used to work
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Your sister sounds like a generous person, to donate her beautiful hair.
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