Writing for line graph
The line graph compares the quantities of books read by male and female at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 to 2014.
It is clear that the average number of books read by both men and women rose considerably over the 4-year period. The year 2013 marks the point at which the number of books read by male overtook that by female.
In 2011, around 5000 books was read by women, while men read about only 3000 books. The number of books read by women rose to just over 8000 in the following year, compared to about 4000 books read by men.
In the year 2013, the biggest change was seen in the number of books for male reader, which rose dramatically to around 10000, reaching the same number of books for female reader. By 2014, male read the most, at nearly 14000 books. By contrast, the number of books read by female fell suddenly to roughly 8000 (Is unit needed here?), a drop of 2000 books.
Thank you in advance!
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The line graph compares the quantities of books read by males and females at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 to 2014.
It is clear that the average number of books read by both men and women rose considerably over the 4-year period. The year 2013 marks the point at which the number of books read by males overtook that by females.
In 2011, around 5000 bookswas were read by women, while men only read about only 3000 books. The number of books read by women rose to just over 8000 in the following year, compared to about 4000 books read by men.
In the year 2013, the biggest change was seen in the number of books for male readers, which rose dramatically to around 10000, reaching the same number of books for female readers. By 2014, males read the most, at nearly 14000 books. By contrast, the number of books read by females fell suddenly to roughly 8000 (Is unit needed here? No need for unit because the reader will know by the context), a drop of 2000 books.
Thank you in advance!
It is clear that the average number of books read by both men and women rose considerably over the 4-year period. The year 2013 marks the point at which the number of books read by males overtook that by females.
In 2011, around 5000 books
In the year 2013, the biggest change was seen in the number of books for male readers, which rose dramatically to around 10000, reaching the same number of books for female readers. By 2014, males read the most, at nearly 14000 books. By contrast, the number of books read by females fell suddenly to roughly 8000 (Is unit needed here? No need for unit because the reader will know by the context), a drop of 2000 books.
Thank you in advance!
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