Using word "world". Please correct me ^___^
There once was a genius man. He desired to change that cruel world and be able to influence the world view of many politics. So, one day he met a woman, fell in love and asked to be his wife. That lady changed his life. From now on he thought that the world revolved around her. Unfortunately, his wife passed away and his world fell apart. He started living in his own small world, he shut out the world. The genius man gave up his dream to take on the world and comitted a suicide. Then that event shook the whole world.
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There once was a genius man. He wanted to change this cruel world and be able to influence the world's view of many politics. Then one day he met a woman, fell in love and asked her to be his wife. That lady changed his life. From then on he thought that the world revolved around her. Unfortunately, his wife passed away and his world fell apart. He started living in his own little world, he shut out the world. The genius man gave up on his dream to take on the world and comitted a suicide. Then that event shook the whole world.
Note: "small" and "little" mean the same thing but we always use little in this context. Good job!
Note: "small" and "little" mean the same thing but we always use little in this context. Good job!
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what a thought , I think you're a good script writer
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