retelling We were moving on river. It was usual day for us. We saw nothing interesting in this day. When we passed still one lock, I remembered one episode from my life. I immediately told this story.

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retelling We were moving on river. It was usual day for us. We saw nothing interesting in this day. When we passed still one lock, I remembered one episode from my life. I immediately told this story. It happened long time ago. We together were moving on river though one lock. We saw a photographer on the coast. George started brush his trousers and fixed his hair for good a photograph with him. After this moment, I stood up and wait when the photographer took a photo together with me. I heard one voice behind over me. One man called out me and told me that I had problems with my nose. I didn't understand what this man wanted of me. As time passed, I heard other voices behind me. They yelled me. I looked behind and saw our boat caught the big branch of tree. I tried to decide this problem with boat . We fell on the floor a boat. The Photographer made few photos with us. It was terrible photos with us. Next morning the river carried us in wrong way. After this we decided came back in city.

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Retelling a story

We were moving on the river. It was a usual day for us. We saw nothing interesting in that this day. When we passed still one lock, I remembered one episode from my life. I immediately told this story. It happened a long time ago. We together were moving on the river though one lock. We saw a photographer on the bank coast. George started to brush his trousers and fixed his hair to look good for a photograph. for good a photograph with him. After this moment, I stood up and waited for when the photographer to take took a photo together with of me. I heard a one voice behind over me. One A man was calling called out to me saying and told me that I had problems with my nose. I didn't understand what this man meant wanted of me. As time passed, I heard other voices behind me. They yelled at me. I looked behind and saw our boat had caught the big branch of tree. I tried to decide what to do. this problem with boat . We fell on the deck of the floor a boat. The photographer took made few photos of with us, they were It was terrible photos of with us. Next morning the river carried us the in wrong way. After this we decided to return to the came back in city.

Retelling [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

We were moving on the river. It was a usual day for us. We saw nothing interesting in this day. When we passed still another lock, I remembered one episode from my life. I immediately told this story. It happened a long time ago. We together were moving on the river though one lock. We saw a photographer on the shore. George started to brush his trousers and fixed his hair for a good photograph with him. After this moment, I stood up and waited when the photographer took a photo together with me. I heard one voice behind me. One man called out to me and told me that I had problems with my nose. I didn't understand what this man wanted of me. As time passed, I heard other voices behind me. They yelled at me. I looked behind and saw our boat caught the big branch of a tree. I tried to decide what to do about this problem with the boat. We fell on the floor of the boat. The Photographer made a few photos with us. They were terrible photos with us. The next morning the river carried us in the wrong direction. After this we decided to come back into the city.

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