Search from various English teachers...
Italy flagAlessandra
Please help me with my writing ! (And looking for language partner ~ It’s generally believed that it’s very complex to educate children at their young age. And nowadays, some hold the view that it’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. What’s more, punishment is necessary .

Personal speaking, I am highly agreed on this statement. First of al, children are more likely to be taught on early stage. Once some wrong behaviors grow into habits, it’s rather difficult to correct.

What’s more, it’s essential to make children aware of the importance of regulation. So they can manage to behave themselves.

Corrections · 2

0
It’s generally believed that it’s very complicated to educate children at their young age.nowadays, some hold the view that it’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. What’s more ?, punishment is necessary .

Personal speaking, I am highly agreed on this statement. First of al, children are more likely to be taught on early stage. Once some wrong behaviors grow into habits which will be difficult to correct.

What’s more, it’s essential to make children aware of the importance of regulation. So they can manage themselves.

0

Please help me with my writing ! (And looking for language partner ~

It’s generally believed that it’s very complex (difficult may be a more suitable word) to educate children at their young age. And nowadays, some hold the view that it’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. What’s more, punishment is necessary.

Personally speaking, I am highly agree with this statement. First of all, children are more likely to be taught on at an early stage. Once some wrong behaviors grow into habits, it’s rather difficult to correct.

What’s more, it’s essential to make children aware of the importance of regulation so they can manage to behave themselves.

Great piece of writing! :)

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today