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My favorite season of the year. I like Summer more than other seasons. I think that most people will be agree with me, because there are many reasons why Summer is better. Usually Summer it is the warmest period of the year, so you can spend more time outside. You do not need to wear warm clothes unlike other seasons. At sunny hollidays you can walk around in the centre of your town or go to the picnic to a park. This is the best time to go to the beach where you can swim and tan. If I go to the beach, I'm able to lie on the sunbed all day. Also in Summer often we eat a lot of icecream and it makes me happy, because I like an icecream too much. Furthermore it is great time to travel around your country. But most of all I like it when together with my family I go to our country house for the whole summer. At this time of year, living in a country house, we can spend the most time together.

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My favorite season of the year.

I like Summer more than the other seasons.
I think that most people will be agree with me, because there are many reasons why Ssummer is better.
Usually summer it is the warmest period of the year, so you can spend more time outside.
You do not need to wear warm clothes unlike other seasons.
At On sunny hollidays you can walk around in the centre of your town or go to the a picnic to in a park.
This is the best time to go to the beach where you can swim and tan.
If I go to the beach, I'm able to lie on the sunbed in the sun all day.
Also in summer often we often eat a lot of ice cream and it makes me happy, because I like an ice cream too much a lot.
Furthermore it is great time to travel around your country.
But most of all I like it when together with my family I can go to our country house for the whole summer.
At this time of year, living in a country house, we can spend the most time together.

1) "ice cream" is always two words.

2) Normally there is no comma before "because".

3) "together with my family I can go ..." is correct, but awkward. I would say "my family and I can go to our country house..."


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Gab - I agree with you 100%
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But if you are cold in winter you can add another one clothes on your body, while if in summer is too hot, when you have dressed out every clothes, what do you undress ?

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