Correct my text about music :)
Today I want to tell about music. I think every person listen to music once in a while. And I am confident that the sounds of music around us every day! It's everywhere. I hear it in the song of the birds, in the whisper of the wind, in the wind in the trees, and even in the noise ot the big cities.
I like different styles of music. I listened to soft rock and pop as a child. In the university I started listening to punk and hard rock. It was amazing and fantastic period of my life. I went to concerts very often and really had fun there. Thank to music I met many interesting and clever people. Some of them became my good friends. We have been friends although many years have passed.
Now I listen to lighter music. I start listen to jazz, classic and meditation music. Also I like rock and roll! Music is still very important part of my life. Music is medicine for me, music changes me. Music gives me great pleasure, relaxation and inspiration.
I think that the ability to make music is the greatest talent. I tried to play the guitar but I made little progress. Also I learned to play the drums. Perhaps I will return to play the guitar this year.
Listen to music! Love music! It's magic and wonderful!
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Correct my text about music :)
Today I want to tell talk about music. I think everybody person listens to music once in a while. And I am confident ? that the sounds of music around us every day! It's everywhere. I hear it in the song of the birds, in the whisper of the wind, in the wind in the trees and even in the noise of the big cities.I like different styles of music. I listened to soft rock and pop as a child. In the At university I started listening to punk and hard rock. It was amazing, and a fantastic period of my life. I went to concerts very often and really had fun there. Thank to music I met many clever interesting and clever people. Some of them became my good friends and we have been remained friends for many years. although many years have passed. (or you could just say 'and we have remained so for many years')
Now I listen to lighter music. I start listen to jazz, classic and meditation music. Also I like rock and roll! Music is still a very important part of my life. Music is medicine for me, music changes me. Music gives me great pleasure, relaxation and inspiration.
I think that the ability to make music is the greatest talent. I tried to play the guitar but I made little progress. Also I learned to play the drums. Perhaps I will return to play the guitar this year.
Listen to music! Love music! It's magical and wonderful!
Yes in deed! I am not sure what you meant by 'confident' in your first line? My suggestions, not corrections, would be 'frequently' instead of very often... music plays an important part... :)
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Today I want to talk about music. I think every person listens to music once in a while. And I am confident that the sounds of music are around us every day! It's everywhere. I hear it in the song of the birds, in the whisper of the wind, in the wind in the trees, and even in the noise of the big cities.I like different styles of music. I listened to soft rock and pop as a child. In the university I started listening to punk and hard rock. It was amazing and a fantastic period of my life. I often went to concerts very often and really had fun there. Thank to music I met many interesting and clever people. Some of them became my good friends. We have been friends although many years have passed.
Now I listen to lighter music. I start listening to jazz, classic and meditation music. Also I like rock and roll! Music is still a very important part of my life. Music is medicine for me, music changes me. Music gives me great pleasure, relaxation and inspiration.
I think that the ability to make music is the greatest talent. I tried to play the guitar but I made little progress. Also I learned to play the drums. Perhaps I will return to play the guitar this year.
Listen to music! Love music! It's magic and wonderful!
And you wrote a very interesting text! Apart from missing indefinite articles (a, an) and writing in the correct tense, you are doing very well. Keep it up! Try writing about your time at university, maybe about your youth, etc.
Take a look at the following article about when to use the indefinite articles.
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