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My summer vacation plan (5)
Today, like yesterday, I searched for places I could stay during my trip./The last couple of days I have been searching for a place where I can stay during my trip And I was surprised at the accommodation fees in Helsinki because they were roughly twice as high than in Moscow. I also looked into that at Airbnb, but the result was almost the same. I'm wondering if I can find an affordable and cozy place there./ I wonder if I'm able to find an affordable and cozy place thereAnyway, I need to book soon before the cheaper hostels gets fully reserved.
My summer vacation plan (5)
Same as yesterday, today I searched for places where I could stay during my trip. And I was surprised at the accommodation fees in Helsinki because they were roughly twice as high as that in Moscow. I also looked into that by Airbnb, but the result was almost the same. I'm wondering if I could find an affordable and cozy place there.Anyway, I need to book soon before the cheaper hostels get fully reserved.
Same as yesterday, today I looked up places to stay during my trip; I was surprised at how expensive Helsinki is, about twice as much as Moscow. I also checked Airbnb, but the result was about the same. Now I'm wondering whether I can find an affordable and cozy place in Helsinki. Anyway, I need to reserve something soon before the cheap hostels get full.
Hi Yuko, as usual really good. The only thing to notice is that in your sentence 'I'm wondering if I could find an affordable and cozy place there.', it is not clear whether 'there' means Helsinki or Moscow; on one hand, you are, in general, talking about Helsinki, but on the other hand, the last place you mention before using 'there' is Moscow, so you can just clarify what you mean by replacing 'there' with 'Helsinki. Other than that, everything looks great.
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