A Bet With My Young Brother
The day before yesterday, my young brother bet 100RMB 1 pound that he’ll lose 10 pounds in fifteen days. However, when he saw the delicious food that my mom cooked last night, he wanted to back out, but I refused. Then this morning I saw him was running on the treadmill. :D
After he finished, I also run on the treadmill for one and half hour.
I hope both of us could keep running. Fighting!
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A Bet with my Young Brother
The day before yesterday, my young brother bet me 100RMB 1 pound that he’ll lose 10 pounds in 15 days. However, when he saw the delicious food that my mum cooked last night, he wanted to back out, but I refused. Then, this morning, I saw he was running on the treadmill. :DAfter he finished, I also ran on the treadmill for an hour and a half.
I hope both of us can keep running. Fighting!*
-In titles, the propositions are not capitalised, only words of 4 letters or more/important words are.
-Either say "ten" and "fifteen", or use numbers, you need to be consistent
-Mom is the American spelling, we spell it "mum"
*We don't have an expression like 加油, but if you are writing "fighting" just for a joke, then it's OK.
Very good! Keep fighting lol! 繼續加油喔！
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The day before yesterday, my younger brother bet me 100RMB 1 pound that he’ll can lose 10 ten pounds in fifteen days. However, when he saw the delicious food that my mom cooked was cooking last night, he wanted to back out. but I refused. Then this morning I saw him was running on the treadmill. :D After he finished, I also run ran on the treadmill for one and a half hours. I hope we both of us could will keep running. Fighting! Go us! We can do it! Let's do it! Don't give up!
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