Public Policies
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Public policies are a powerful instrument of intervention to promote changes that are of public interest for societies. However, it happens that these public policies are sometimes ineffective or inefficient. This is due to the fact that their purposes are distant from the real communities’ needs, the existence of inconsistencies or lack of coordination between intentions and actions, the absence of legitimate political leadership or the expected results that cannot be persisted in the long term. It should also be added that public policies are aimed at favoring certain actors, but simultaneously, could be opposed to the interests of others. This could create a dispute field between actors that participate in different arenas and have rationalities and logics in conflict. That is reason for which the process of building effective public policies presupposes, as a consequence, a deep and solid understanding of the contexts and the factors that could influence the change dynamics that are intended to be boosted.
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Public Policies
Hello everybody! Could you please help me with correcting this these paragraph? Thank in advance!Public policies are a powerful instrument of intervention to promote changes that is are in the of public interest. for societies. However, it happens that these public policies are sometimes ineffective or inefficient. This is due to the fact that their purposes are distant from the real communities’ needs, the existence of inconsistencies or lack of coordination between intentions and actions, the absence of legitimate political leadership or the expected results that cannot be persisted in the long term. This sentence is TOO LONG, but well written, see below for an idea.
It should also be added that public policies are aimed at favoring certain factors, but simultaneously, could be opposed to the interests of others. This could create a dispute field between actors that participate in different arenas and have beliefs rationalities and methodslogics in conflict. That is reason for which the process of building effective public policies presupposes, as a consequence, a deep and solid understanding of the contexts and the factors that could influence the change dynamics that are intended to be boosted.
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However, it happens that these public policies are sometimes ineffective or inefficient. This may be is due to the fact that their purposes are distant from the real communities’ needs as well as the existence of inconsistencies. It could also be or lack of coordination between intentions and actions, the absence of legitimate political leadership or the expected results that cannot be persisted in the long term.
In English, we try not to write long sentences with more than 2 commas. Yes we do it. BUT when you write a technical piece, it makes it hard to read. You write extremely well.
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