The City View at Night Time
(I would appreciate it if you could correct my texts below so as to they sound native.)
Yesterday night, It had been a while since I drove a city. Actually, I just sat on the next to a person who drove, though. I realized again how extravagant city lights at night are. It was nice to go back home by using different means of transportation.
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The City View at Night Time
(I would appreciate it if you could correct my texts below so as to they sound native.)Yesterday Last night: It had been a while since I drove in a city. Actually, I just sat on the next to a person who drove, though.
I realized again how extravagant city lights at night are.
I again realized how extravagant the city lights are at night. or
It was nice to go back home by using different means of transportation.
Good job. Just a few little things.
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Until yesterday evening, it had been a while since I drove in the city. Actually, I just sat next to the driver, though. I realized once again how extravagant city lights are at night. It was nice to go home via a different means of transportation.
"using a different means of transportation" is OK too, but sounds a bit stilted. Maybe better would be "It was nice to go home by car, for a change."
"using a different means of transportation" is OK too, but sounds a bit stilted. Maybe better would be "It was nice to go home by car, for a change."
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