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April 6th, 2018 April 6th, 2018 _ I tried cooking omurice for the first time but it was not successful. _ I learned how to draw a portrait sculpture. _ My cousin sent me messages this evening to asked me to hang out with her at night, but I was busy taking my drawing class at that time, so I missed her message and couldn't hang out with her either. _ My friend also asked me to go to see "Ready player one" at the cinema. I watched its trailer and found it's not interesting much, so I refused to go with her/ declined her invitation.

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I tried cooking omurice (I’m not sure what omurice is?) for the first time but it was not successful. I learned how to draw a portrait sculpture (What do you mean portrait sculpture?). My cousin sent me (a) message this evening to ask me to hang out with her last night (at night is not incorrect however, last night sounds better), but I was busy taking my drawing class at that time, so I missed her message and couldn’t hang out with her either. My friend also asked me to go see “Ready Player One” at the cinema, but I’m out of money and not interested in that movie much, so I declined her invitation (declined her invitation sounds more polite and better than refused to go with her) I tried cooking omurice for the first time but it was not successful. I learned how to draw a portrait sculpture. My cousin sent me a message this evening to ask me to hang out with her last night, but I was busy taking my drawing class at that time, so I missed her message and couldn’t hang out with her either. My friend also asked me to go see “Ready Player One” at the cinema, but I’m out of money and not interested in that movie much, so I declined her invitation.

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