Global Warming
During the last fifty years, our planet experienced a considerable rise in its temperature; what is known as global warming. This essay will shed light on the main causes and the possible solutions of this phenomenon.
Greenhouse gases - mainly CO2 - are the principal culprit of global warming. Elevated level of CO2 in the atmosphere is due to both elevated levels of emissions and reduced rate of clearance. The growing rise in the usage of fossil fuels either by vehicles or through power plants is the main reason for mounting levels of CO2 emissions. Regarding reduced rate of clearance, deforestation plays the main role. For thousands of years, plants work on absorbing CO2 from the atmosphere and replacing it by O2; deforestation unfortunately deprives our planet from this gift. These reasons collectively resulted in accumulation of millions of tons of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, which in turn had started to damage the ozone layer.
Talking about solutions, both individuals and governmental bodies all over the world have to work hardly and collaboratively to tackle this dangerous phenomenon. First, individuals should try to cut down on using their private cars by using public transportation or bicycles, for instance. Not only this, but also they should be keen to reduce the use of electric power at homes and workplaces as far as possible. Second, government should pursue to develop environmentally-friendly power sources, for example, solar energy, wind power, and biodiesel. Moreover, government should aim at restoring the green landscapes.
In conclusion, global warming is considered one of the most significant threats to humanity in the last century. This serious challenge needs industrious and cooperative efforts from both governments and individuals to be managed properly.
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Global Warming
During the last fifty years, our planet has experienced a considerable rise in its temperature, what is known as global warming. This essay will shed light on the main causes and the possible solutions of this phenomenon.Greenhouse gases - mainly CO2 - are the principal culprit of global warming. The elevated level of CO2 in the atmosphere is due to the elevated levels of emissions and the reduced rate of clearance(this word is wrongly used). The growing rise in the use of fossil fuels either by vehicles or through power plants is the main reason for the mounting levels of CO2 emissions. Regarding the reduced rate of clearance, deforestation plays a main role in the degradation of our planet. For thousands of years, plants have been absorbing CO2 from the atmosphere and replacing it with oxygen; Unfortunately, deforestation unfortunately deprives our planet from this gift. These reasons have collectively resulted in the accumulation of millions of tons of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, which in turn has started to damage the ozone layer.
To find a solution, both individuals and governmental bodies all over the world need to work hard to collaboratively to tackle this dangerous phenomenon. For instance, individuals should try to cut down on using their private cars by using public transportation or bicycles, for instance. In addition, but also they should also be keen to reduce the use of electric power at home and in workplaces as much as possible. Secondly, governments should pursue to develop environmentally-friendly power sources like solar energy, wind power, and biodiesel. Moreover, governments should aim to restore our green landscapes.
In conclusion, global warming is considered one of the most significant threats to humanity in the last century. This serious challenge needs industrious and cooperative efforts from both governments and individuals to be managed properly.
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Thanks for you concern Zubin, the question I encountered was:
Write about the following topic:
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
So I thought that I should write about the problems and solutions in separate paragraphs.
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If u r writing for taking ielts, I wuld suggest u to write problem,cause ,solution and example in one paragraph and repeat same order for other problem.
This way ur paragraph wud be structured.
Note- ielts essay we want quality not quantity,so two problems and solution are enough to score good bands
Secondly ,writing more than 270 words will not fetch u more.Its a myth
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If u r writing for taking ielts, I wuld suggest u to write problem,cause ,solution and example in one paragraph and repeat same order for other problem.
This way ur paragraph wud be structured.
Note- ielts essay we want quality not quantity,so two problems and solution are enough to score good bands
Secondly ,writing more than 270 words will not fetch u more.Its a myth
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