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Russia: a mixture of ideologies Russia. The biggest country in the world. Every text or presentation, conected with the russian state, is suposed to begin with this sentence. And there are a lot of reasons for that. Russia has not only the biggest territory but also a history, which contains plenty of changes, which led to the succes of the russian people. The christianization of the Rus set up the begining of the existence of the most east state in Europe as equal to the others, which have the honour to call themselves part of the christian civilization. The russian tsardom was wroten down in the history books as the succesor of the byzantine empire, being the only independent orthodox state in the world. After the win against Sweeden Russia become an empire. That was officialy recognized by the church, which was reformed a bit later by the first emperor Peter I. Under the ruling of the Romanov house the russian empire got more stronger than ever. The more glorious the name of the russian state and emperor was becoming, the more the western enemies and "allies" were trying to conquer this land. However they did not succee. The empire fell after the revolution and several years later there was formed the soviet union. The USSR developed the infrastructure of the lands between baltic sea and the pacific, it reached the space, won the greatest war in the human history, but some errors just like the politic against the religion, the unefective work of some not so good educated leader led to the colapse of one of the greatest countries in the 20. century. The USSR was followed by the Russian Federation. Its first decade was not succesful but in the new century it is devloping faster and faster. In the near future I would like to write a serie of notebooks about the most significant people in the history of Russia, starting with knyaz' Vladimir and ending with the current leaders of the RF. If something offends your nationalities, I am not responsible. And just do not offend yourself, because everything I am going to write is from a subjective point of view.

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Russia: a mixture of ideologies

Russia. It is the biggest country in the world. Every text or presentation, connected with the Russian state, is supposed to begin with this sentence. And there are a lot of reasons for this. Russia has not only the biggest territory but also a (rich) history, which contains plenty of changes developments, which have led to the success of the Russian people.

The Christianization of the Rus' set up the beginning of established the existence of the most easternmost state in (of) Europe as equal to the all others, which have had the honour to call themselves part of the Christian civilization.
The Russian tsardom was written down in the history books as the successor of the Byzantine empire, being the only independent Orthodox state in the world. After the win against (Following the victory over) Sweden, Russia became an empire. This was officially recognized by the Church, which was itself reformed a bit later, by the first emperor Peter I.

Under the reign of the Romanovs (House of Romanov), the Russian empire got was/became more far stronger than ever before. The more glorious the name of the Russian state and its emperor was becoming, the more the western enemies and "allies" were trying to conquer this land. However they did not succeed. The Empire fell after (following) the revolution and several years later there was formed the Soviet Union.

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The USSR developed its land infrastructure of the lands between the Baltic Sea and the Pacific; it reached the space (ventured into outer space), and won the greatest war in the human history. However, some errors did arise (missteps did occur), just like (for example), the politics against (political enmity towards) the religion, as well as ineffective (ineffectual) leadership, which led to the collapse of one of the greatest countries in (of) the 20th century.

The USSR was followed (succeeded) by the Russian Federation. Its first decade was not successful but in this new century, it is developing faster and faster.

In the near future I would like to write a series of notebooks about the most significant people in the history of Russia, starting with Knyaz Vladimir and ending with the current leaders of the RF.

If something (anything regarding my text) offends your nationalities (disposition), please I am not don't hold me responsible. And just Don't be offended yourself, because (as) everything I am going to write is from my subjective point of view (subjective).

- Well-written! Watch your spelling! And remember to capitalize any 'Proper Nouns'.

- Don't worry, every nation considers itself exceptional!


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