Did I make any mistake ?
Dear John,
How are you ?
I’m writing to you because I have moved to
a new house.
I really like it, it’s bigger than
my last house and it has a pool
in the garden.
I would like to invite you to my new house.
.
Best wishes,
Dan
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Did I make any mistake ? (no space in between)
Dear John,How are you ? (no space in between)
I’m writing to you because I have moved to a new house.
I really like it; it’s bigger than my last house and it has a pool
in the garden. I would like to invite you to my new house. (would be better to ask, "Would you like to come and visit?")
. Best wishes,
Dan
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Dear John,
How are you?
I’m writing to you because I have moved to a new house.
I really like it, it’s bigger than my last house and it has a pool
in the garden. I would like to invite you to my new house.
Best wishes,
Dan
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forgot to explain why you have moved~
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