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Please help me with my writing ! From my perspective, it’s a fair point that economic progress is government ‘s most important goals. After all, economy is the base of all the facilities of a country. On the condition that we develop the economy, we can promote other types of progress. Only is the economical progress that can provide the funding that other types of progress need.

What’s more, it’s impossible to keep all types of progress equal and fair. So when it’s necessary, we have to solve the major problem. In conclusion the government is supposed to promote the economic progress.

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It's a fair point that economic progress is a government's most important goal. After all, an economy is the foundation of a country's progress. Progress can happen on the condition that we improve the economy. Only through this can we provide the funding that other types of progress needs.

What’s more, it’s impossible to keep all equal and fair. At times we have to solve any major problems. In conclusion, the government is supposed to promote the economic progress of a country.

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