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lets be love story tellers. let me be a love story teller. Recently, Jack lost his relationship. Actually he was dumped. Jack's her excuse was some of words that he told her are not getting away from her mind. It's like "#1 You are too skinny; you gotta eat well, #2 your skin is dry you; gotta drink more water, #3 your teeth are brown; reduce sugar and get some dental cleaning #4 you are wearing too much make up; if its too much it looks cheap" She was very uncomfortable. How could her boy friend say those? But she loved him, so she did not tell him much. Time to time she let him do what he wanted to and did not let him know how much she hurt by his action. Jack was mischievous or nosy. He was not a gentleman kind of a person. It got worse because of her. She loved him much so bear with his rudeness. Jack was acting like he has some sort of prestige. The funnier part is she did not want to hurt Jack when she dumped Jack. According to her next excuse we can see it. That was her family. She said her mom needed her the most right now so they can not be together. She wanted to live in Asia but decided to be a teacher in her home town and taking care of her mom and sister. Jack knew she cares of her mother and her family. Jack could't ask her to move away from her family for him. They had talked about moving in together and living in another country and dreaming adventurous lives. That did not help at all for both of them when she decided to break up. All the words and promises become nothing,empty and wasted. Its now only in Jack's memory. Can they be back together? Will it be the same?

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Let's be Love Story Tellers.   [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

Let me be a love story teller.
Recently, Jack lost his relationship. Actually he was dumped. Her excuse was some of the words that he told her would not get out of her mind.

They were like:
#1 You are too skinny; you gotta eat well,
#2 Your skin is dry; you gotta drink more water,
#3 Your teeth are brown; reduce sugar and get some dental cleaning,
#4 You are wearing too much make up; if it's too much it looks cheap.

She was very uncomfortable. How could her boy friend say those things? But she loved him, so she did not tell him much about this. Time to time she let him do what he wanted to and did not let him know how much she was hurt by his actions.

Jack was either mischievous or nosy. He was not a gentleman kind of a person.
It got worse because of her. She loved him much so bore with his rudeness.
Jack was acting like he had some sort of prestige.

The funnier part is she did not want to hurt Jack when she dumped him. According to her next excuse it was her family.
She said her mom needed her the most right now so they can not be together. She wanted to live in Asia but decided to be a teacher in her home town and take* care of her mom and sister.

Jack knew she cared for her mother and her family. Jack could't ask her to move away from her family for him. They had talked about moving in together and living in another country and dreaming adventurous lives. That did not help at all for both of them when she decided to break up. All the words and promises become nothing, empty, and wasted.
They're now only in Jack's memory.

Can they be back together?
Will it be the same?

[* Or: "in her home town taking care ...".]

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